The underlying psychology of copywriting
What really makes your consumers tick? Any copywriter who can answer this question holds the Midas touch. If you wish to profoundly influence your target market, you need to understand their psychological make-up. Only then can you pitch your copywriting in a way that resonates with their ‘hot buttons’ or hidden motivators. This is what we call ‘psychologically groomed’ copywriting. A tool that can help you:
Sound good? Let’s look at how you can psychologically groom your copywriting.
It all begins with an understanding of your consumers’ decision-making process.
Emotion is your chief copywriting ally
The human brain functions on three basic levels — instinctive, emotional and rational.
Effective copywriting strategically appeals to all three.
Now, most of your customers would say that their purchasing decisions are rational. Driven by logical reasoning like: I need a new pair of shoes because my current pair have grown uncomfortable. Yet emotion primarily drives consumer decision-making. Your consumer may feel compelled to buy those new shoes because:
All these are examples of ‘hidden motivators’ your copywriting can play to. There are many more, like:
The key is to know the motivators of your particular target market, then tailor your copywriting to fit.
Use copywriting to ignite consumer instinct
Emotion arouses instinct, thus providing another powerful copywriting tool. Say you are pitching to new mothers. Their maternal love arouses an instinct to protect and nurture their baby. Or perhaps you are marketing income protection insurance to executives. Their instinct for self-preservation is aroused by fear of losing income and lifestyle.
Tap into those instincts which dominate your consumers’ action, then tailor your copywriting to fit. A great way to do this is through storytelling. Take readers on a journey where you arouse their instincts, engage emotions, then show them how much better their life will be with your product.
Roll out the rationale in copywriting
So what follows an emotional decision to act? Rational brain functioning! Your consumer employs logic to rationalise their decision. Psychologically groomed copywriting helps them in this process. Outline vividly how much better and easier life will be once they have taken the desired action.
Say you want to sell a designer handbag. Your copywriting should detail the quality of finest leather, intricate hand stitching and exquisite detailing. Outline the investment potential of the bag too. It complements any outfit, offers generous space with clever organisation. Plus with timeless style, your consumer can enjoy her bag all season and it will last her through many more.
Walk in your consumers’ shoes
Just as an actor immerses themselves into character, you must become your consumer. Psychologically groomed copywriting requires that you understand your consumer’s most heartfelt desires, needs and feelings. Then choose words that resonate with these, painting a picture of their ultimate satisfaction. This copywriting method is truly a force to be reckoned with.
Truly terrific copywriting starts with the end in mind
I’m not arguing against the importance of your copy’s message here. Without a doubt, crafting compelling, persuasive and appealing content is a chief concern of every copywriter. But our content is always bound for a final destination — whether online or in print. So a graphic designer will need to take your copywriting and make it look incredible within a visual layout. Quite a tall order when you’re delivering a solid slab of unbroken content. As a copywriter then, you need to keep in mind the medium your content is bound for. Break up your content into easily definable ‘bite-sized’ chunks. Draw out strong word elements to highlight key messages. These are just some things you can do at the copywriting stage. There’s plenty more.
I’ll be sharing some easy and effective ways for achieving aesthetically pleasing content in this blog. So you can instantly put greater visual appeal to work in your copy.
But first, let’s take a look at why good looking copywriting is so important.
It’s not just about making graphic design easier. It’s about doing justice to your copywriting and making this even better! Visual presentation can:
Visually effective copywriting encompasses varied pace and different presentation tools
Here are some great techniques you can use.
Include a headline
Here it is…the first line of copy that your reader will see. So you should seldom write copy without a headline. A headline makes your pitch for you right up front. It hooks the readers’ attention and determines whether they see benefit in reading on. If you are a copywriter, you’re concerned with crafting a powerful punchy headline — as you should be. But you should also use visual savvy to boost headline impact by:
Soup up the subheadings
Subheadings are vastly underused but make a valuable tool for any aesthetically-minded copywriter. They visually break up paragraphs, group information and clearly drive home key ideas. Plus subheads work in tandem with your headline. Telling a compelling ‘at a glance’ story to time-poor readers. Tricks to using subheadings include:
The silver bullet for visually appealing copywriting
Nothing turns a reader off more quickly than great swathes of unbroken content — especially for today’s readers who like to scan. So bullet point lists are a great way to make your copy visually easy to comprehend and succinctly emphasise important info. These are perfect for time-poor readers with short attention spans.
But bullet points can be a double-edged sword. You should use them judiciously. Avoid lengthy bulleted lists — 6 or 7 bullets per list are generally the most you want without overdoing it.
Pull out the pull quotes
A pull quote is a short extract from your copy strategically positioned on the page. Pull quotes are a terrific way to highlight your key ideas. They break up your copy in a visually striking way too. Set your pull quote in a larger font size to create greater visual priority.
Short is sweet for paragraph length
Keep your paragraphs and sentences short in your copywriting! Succinct paragraphs are heaven to modern readers’ eyes. They are easier to digest, take little work to read and look better too. The same goes for sentence length. Aim to keep your average sentence length under 20 words. (You can find the average sentence length in Word, as we explained in a previous post at www.wordnerds.com.au/2009/02/copywriting-basics-aim-for-a-short-average-sentence-length/)
Finally…easy on the font
Don’t extend your creative flair to font choice. A common font will pack a much bigger punch than Wingdings or the like. Stick to one font throughout your copy too. You can select a font family to differentiate headings and subheadings. If you do want to mix it up a little, have no more than three different fonts in one piece of copy.
Remember: consistency is the key to visually appealing copy. So be consistent with typefaces and headline sizes for headlines, subheadings and body copy.
So the next time you need to do some copywriting, infuse visual appeal into it. Your readers and clients will love you for it.
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My actions were exactly those which I want my copywriting to inspire in others. I was a captive audience, instant convert and my interest translated into a sale. What’s more, I’ll always keep an eye out for new books by that same author now.
So in this copywriting blog post, we’ll discuss why storytelling can have profound impact on your copywriting. Then we’ll look at how to ensure this impact is positive.
But first, why is storytelling such a powerful copywriting tool?
I’ll give you three great reasons.
Ignited imagination makes for powerful persuasion
Get your consumer emotionally connected with your copy and you’ve hit a home run. Whatever action you want people to take, you need to invoke feeling behind this. When people feel sympathy they are moved to make charitable donations. When people feel empowered they want the product that instigates this sensation. So put storytelling to work in your copy and you’ll stir feelings that persuade readers to buy what you’re selling because storytelling makes your copy more meaningful.
Storytelling is the art of subliminal selling
A carefully crafted plot takes your readers on a journey. Each stage of that journey is signposted: need, solution, even fresh possibilities. But often your readers don’t notice what they’re absorbing along the way. A great story will leave your concept, purpose and desired action firmly implanted in your readers’ minds. In the end they may not know why they must act — they simply feel they must. In essence, storytelling when copywriting sells to the subconscious.
Storytelling in copywriting is all about the feel-good feeling
We’re surrounded by stories in our everyday life. Movies, books, even the exchange of news with our friends. Stories feel very natural to people – even reassuring. Herein lies the power of storytelling through copywriting. When your audience feels comfortable they’re more receptive to what you have to say. People instinctively distrust a sales pitch. But storytelling leads your reader down a different path — one of new ideas, exciting possibilities and wonderful solutions. So you can skip right over resistance and scepticism to an open-minded, interested audience.
But under every great story must be an even greater strategy!
When copywriting we need to do more than just spin a good yarn. We don’t write to entertain alone. We want that captivated audience to finish reading our copy — then take action. We want them to pick up the phone and call us, race out to buy our product (like I did with my books) or reach into their pockets for a generous donation. Creative copywriting always has a purpose and it is crucial that you don’t lose sight of this just to tell an entertaining tale.
So how do you make storytelling both strategic and scintillating?
Here are some quick tips to make sure your storytelling has a happy ending:
Give storytelling a go in your next copywriting project. You’ll be thrilled at the results…and probably rejuvenate your creative juices to boot.
About the author: Naomi Cox is a Word Nerds copywriter who has held marketing and public relations positions in corporations and government departments in Australia and New Zealand.
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One helpful guide I have used over the years is How to Write Powerful Catalog Copy by Herschell Gordon Lewis. In the book, Lewis defines the fourteen main catalogue copywriting styles, and when it’s best to use each one.
Although the book was published twenty years ago, the ideas presented are just as applicable today.
Lewis defines the fourteen copywriting styles as:
Lewis uses a fictitious Tex-Mex salsa product to show the 14 catalogue copywriting styles.
Jes Folk Copy
Although the Jes Folk copywriting style is easy to read and entertaining, Lewis warns that readers can get tired of it after a few pages.
I went all the way down to Matamoros to sample this ‘Tex-Mex’ salsa, and danged if it isn’t hotter than an El Paso afternoon. We don’t call it “Hell-Fire” Sauce for nothin’, and it if don’t give your tastebuds a pretty strong bite, you got us beat before we start.
Down Home Copy
Lewis notes that this style of copywriting makes readers feel that they are being addressed directly, but it might be difficult to come up with interesting stories for all products in a catalogue.
My aunt Maria vacationed in Mexico and was so excited she phoned me. “I’ve found the hottest ‘Tex-Mex’ salsa I’ve ever tasted,” she said. “It’s wonderful. I bought a case, and I think you ought to have it in the catalog.” Aunt Maria isn’t often wrong, so we made an exclusive arrangement with the small Mexican company that makes “Hell-Fire” Sauce. If you’re brave…or if you love real Mexican sauce…you have to get some.
You-You-You Copy
This style of copywriting, which addresses the reader by repeating the word ‘you’, is promoted in many copywriting books. Lewis believes it can work in catalogues but becomes repetitive if you have many items to sell.
You think you’ve tasted hot pepper salsa? Oh, no, you haven’t. That is, you haven’t tasted the real salsa until you’ve dipped a spoon into our “Hell-Fire” Sauce and sprinkled a little on your salad. Your tongue will tell you: You never knew a hot sauce could be this good.
Shout Copy
Shout copy is the easiest to write (and requires many exclamation marks).
A Hell-Fire Deal on “Hell-Fire” Salsa! 14-ounce bottle, $2.49!
Quietly Upscale Descriptive Copy
According to Lewis, this style of copywriting was popular during the early 1980s when baby boomer yuppies, its main targets, were past their status-seeking phase.
For your next party, this unusually hot sauce with the unusually hot name can be the evening’s hottest topic of conversation.
“Hell-Fire” isn’t for everybody. In fact, we don’t recommend its daily use, because it makes every other sauce seem so tame…
Image All the Way Copy
This style of copywriting ties a known person or place with your offering, and is less subtle than Quietly Upscale Descriptive copy.
If JP Morgan and John D Rockefeller came to your home, they’d know whether to stay for the authentic Mexican dinner you’ve prepared. “Hell-Fire” on the table means genuine “Tex-Mex” on the palate.
Touchstone Copy
When copywriting using the Touchstone style, you connect your product to a known base, called a touchstone.
In 1912 the Mexican bandit and folk hero Pancho Villa escaped to the United States. After his triumphant return in 1913 he formed the famous Division del Norte. One of the prizes he brought across the border was a recipe unlike any tasted before: “Hell-Fire.” When Villa became governor of the state of Chihuahua, he served this unique hot sauce to special guests at his dinner table. Now you can serve it to your special guests.
Minimalist Copy
This style of copywriting works well when you have limited space, such as a digest style catalogue.
Famous “Hell-Fire” Salsa–the very hottest. 14-oz. bottle, $2.49.
All the Facts Copy
Lewis writes that this style of copywriting is based on two assumptions: 1) The more the reader knows, the more likely they are to buy your products. 2) The more you tell, the more the reader will believe you. All the Facts copy is well-suited to business-to-business catalogues and websites, because business buying decisions tend to be more logic based, and the buyer usually needs to justify the decision to another person in the organisation.
“Hell-Fire” Salsa–Bottled in limited quantities in Matamoros, this authentic “Tex-Mex” salsa combines red peppers, jalapenos, green chilli peppers, peeled and chopped beefsteak tomatoes, scallions, and a touch of cilantro. Our peppers are transplanted from their original site in French Guiana to a private orchard outside Matamoros, where parallel climate ripens them to produce the hot capsicum extract. Our master chef Pablo grinds the pepper to a fine powder. Soaks them in brine to “loosen” the flavour, then marries them to the tomatoes in our special sharp vinegar.
This copywriting style might be most suitable for this product if you are selling to chefs and food connoisseurs.
Informational/Educational Copy
Although this copywriting style might not lend itself well to the sample product of salsa, it can work well for products such as software, garden supplies, electronics, and chemicals.
Cilantro is the fresh leaf of the coriander plant. This delicate fragrant-pungent leaf is one of the oldest spices known to man. When the Romans used finely chopped cilantro to season their bread, the spices had been known for thousands of years. Each 14 oz. bottle of “Hell-Fire” salsa includes both cilantro and…
Snob Appeal Copy
According to Lewis, the style of copywriting works when snobbery is in vogue. The copy, layout and illustration need to match perfectly for Snob Appeal copy to work.
Only 1,200 bottles…ever, this entire year. Our exclusive “Hell-Fire” Salsa is made from such rare herbs, under such rigidly controlled conditions, that only 1,200 bottles will be available this year. We must limit any purchase to two bottles (subject to availability, of course). Each numbered bottle carries the Seal of Elegance. Handsomely gift boxed for your favorite gourmet who cannot obtain this elsewhere. 14 ounces, twenty-nine dollars.
I Am the Greatest Copy
This copywriting style speaks for itself. Those who believe it’s the best product will buy, and the rest probably won’t. The challenge is answering the question: Better than what? Discerning buyers want proof that it’s better.
The Best Salsa. In comparisons tests, our Kitchen Board rated this salsa superior in consistency, palatability, and flavor. Unlike other sauces tested, “Hell-Fire” contains genuine tomatoes and fresh spices, producing a greater degree of effectiveness, when applied to both tortillas and salads. $2.49, unconditionally guaranteed.
Plain Vanilla Copy
This copywriting style might be the right choice if you want to keep it simple and give your readers a break from too much text. Lewis recommends it for multi-product catalogues of household staples.
“Hell-Fire” Hot Salsa–14 oz. bottle. Ingredients: red peppers, jalapenos, green chilli peppers, beefsteak tomatoes, scallions, cilantro. $2.49.
Choosing the right copywriting style for your catalogue or website will depend a number of factors including your industry, products and market. Lewis notes that readers can get bored with one copywriting style if it’s overused. For catalogues, he recommends breaking the catalogue into themed sections and using one style in each section. Although How to Write Powerful Catalog Copy was written before the widespread use of the Internet, you can apply this advice to ecommerce websites as well.
Note: How to Write Powerful Catalog Copy is no longer in print but can be purchased from used book websites such as Alibris and Abebooks.
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Robert Bly, copywriting authority and author of The Copywriter’s Handbook, agreed with Ogilvy when he wrote, ‘Never do anything to make the copy difficult to read. Type should be set in black against a clear white background – not a tint, not white on black, not in color.’
Ogilvy’s and Bly’s opinions on reverse type are supported by research. Colin Wheildon, editor of an Australian motoring magazine, tested the assertion that reverse type is difficult to read and lowers comprehension. He published his findings in Type & Layout: how typography and design can get your message across – or get in the way.
Here are Wheildon’s results that show how much reverse type can lower comprehension.
Colour combination Comprehension (percentage of readers)
Good Fair Poor
Text printed black on white 70 19 11
Text printed white on black 0 12 88
Text printed white on purple 2 16 82
Text printed white on royal blue 0 4 96
From these results you can see that reverse type lowers comprehension levels of text – so if you want readers to understand your message, don’t use reverse type for large amounts of text.
Another test conducted by Williams Sonoma, a major US gourmet food and cookware catalogue, found that its sales increased by 33 per cent after simply switching the type in one catalogue from reverse to black text on a white background.
After listening to the experts and reviewing the research, it is clear that it’s best to not use reverse type in your printed publications and websites. Although it might look stylish, it decreases the effectiveness of your copywriting.
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We get many enquiries about our copywriting services. One of the most frequent questions is “How can you write about my business or industry when you have no experience in it?”
It’s understandable that business people have some doubts about a freelance copywriter’s ability to understand their business and industry. An experienced freelance copywriter, however, can write about a range of businesses and industries without having worked in them.
A freelance copywriter doesn’t sit down and start spontaneously writing copy for a business. Before a freelance copywriter can start writing about a business they need to conduct extensive research. This research will cover the business, the products or services it offers, the industry the company operates in, and its target market.
Misconceptions about freelance copywriters
I think part of the misconception of freelance copywriters (and writers in general) comes from films and television shows where writers are portrayed rapidly typing at a typewriters or computers. This is especially true when showing newsrooms full of writers quickly tapping away.
There are two things wrong with this picture. The first is that newspaper reporters aren’t necessarily good copywriters. It’s actually more helpful to have sales or marketing background to become a good copywriter. News reporting is simply reporting the facts of a story, or what news organisations want us to believe are the facts. Newspaper reporters also have sub-editors who check their work and improve before it goes to press. Freelance copywriters, in most cases, draft and redraft their work without the help of editors.
A freelance copywriter needs to understand persuasion
A freelance copywriter needs to persuade the readers to accept a point of view about a product, service or idea. This requires a deeper understanding of writing and persuasion techniques that are not required for news reporting. A freelance copywriter has to be part sales person and part psychologist to understand what motivates customers to buy products and services.
The second thing wrong with the picture of fast typing writers is that writing is one of the final stages of the process. A good freelance copywriter will conduct a significant amount of research to understand the products or services, the company, the industry and the market. The freelance copywriter must complete this research before the writing begins. Some freelance copywriters brag about being able to work fast. Good copywriting takes time. There’s no way you can be a fast copywriter and produce good copy. Would you go to an accountant, surgeon, dentist or solicitor who told you they do their work quickly?
A freelance copywriter brings a fresh perspective
It’s true that a person working in the industry or business will already have the background knowledge to write copy, but an outsider will usually see things that the insider won’t.
You see yourself in the mirror every day, but you wouldn’t try giving yourself a haircut. An experienced hair stylist will do a better job at cutting your hair than you can do by yourself. The same is true about copywriting – a freelance copywriter is often better copywriter for the business, once they have done their research, than a person directly involved with the organisation.
As I mentioned, a freelance copywriter gains an understanding of the organisation, its products or services, industry sector, and potential customers through research.
A good starting point for the freelance copywriter is to read as much as possible about the business. A freelance copywriter can read websites, brochures, media releases, articles, case studies and other documents. Internal documents, such as business plans and employees newsletters, can also be very helpful in learning about the organisation. To learn about the industry, a freelance copywriter can read competitors’ websites and industry publications.
Once the freelance copywriter has the basic background knowledge, they are then ready to interview key personnel to get their perspective on the company and its products or services. The freelance copywriter should ask a range of questions to determine how to present the organisation and its products or services. Most importantly, the freelance copywriter needs to understand how the company helps its customers overcome their problems by purchasing its products or services.
Amateur copywriters often make the mistake of focusing the attention of their writing on the business, and how great it is, when it’s most important to focus on the benefits to customers (see What Many Advertising Agencies Don’t Know About Copywriting at http://www.wordnerds.com.au/category/copywriting/.
In some formats, such as company profiles and ‘About Us’ pages on websites, it’s appropriate to brag a little and focus more on the company and its achievements.
Once the freelance copywriter has conducted research and interviews they are ready begin writing. At this point, the freelance copywriter should have a good understanding of the organisation, its market and what it sells.
In the next post, we’ll continue with tips for working with a freelance copywriter. In the meantime, we welcome your comments.
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We wrote the article to highlight the fact that some copywriters don’t focus on the customer in their copy. We looked at some copywriting samples from advertising agencies to show that they use the words ‘our clients’ when the word ‘you’ would be more effective.
We didn’t pull this idea out of thin air. All the copywriting books that we’ve read recommend using second person (’you’) in your copywriting.
For instance, a seminal work on copywriting is The Copywriter’s Handbook by Robert Bly. This book was first published in 1985 and has been reprinted several times.
In The Copywriter’s Handbook, Bly writes about what he calls ‘customer-oriented copy’.
One technique to help you write for the reader is to address the reader directly as ‘you’ in the copy ─ just as I am writing to you in this book. Copywriters call this the ‘you orientation.’ Flip through a magazine and you’ll see that 90 percent of the ads contain the word ‘you’ in the body copy.
Bly shows the difference between customer-oriented copywriting and advertiser-oriented copywriting in the following examples.
1. BankPlan is the state-of-the-art in user-friendly, sophisticated financial software for small business accounts receivable, accounts payable, and general ledger applications.
2. BankPlan helps you balance your books and manage your cash flow. It also keeps track of customers who haven’t paid their bills. Best of all, the program is easy to use — you don’t need special training.
Which do you think is more effective?
In the previous copywriting blog post we showed that many advertising agencies fail to apply ‘you orientation’ in their copywriting. Their copy is more like the first example above.
Robert Bly isn’t the only one to write about customer-oriented (second person) copy. If you do international Google searches for the phrases “second person” copywriting and customer-oriented copywriting you’ll finds hundreds of copywriting blog posts and articles about the benefits of writing directly to your readers.
So when advertising agencies write ‘our clients’ instead of ‘you’ in their own promotional copy, they aren’t ‘wrong’ ─ they’re just not being effective as they can be.
We welcome your comments.
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The consensus among copywriters is that using second person when copywriting is one of the best ways to connect with your readers.
I did some research and found that many advertising and marketing agencies don’t know this simple rule in their own copywriting. Some of these firms are internationally recognised as the top marketing and advertising agencies. You’d think they would know better, but I guess a big name doesn’t always guarantee quality copywriting.
Let’s look at a few of the examples of how some marketing and advertising agencies fail to use second person in their copywriting (I’m not mentioning any names here because I don’t want to offend anyone).
Examples of copywriting that aren’t customer focused
1.We offer our clients a full spectrum of advertising related services.
2. We offer our clients common sense advice that helps them grow their businesses.
3. Our attention to detail and timelines and our solid production base enables us to offer our clients the best results.
4. This level of integration allows us to offer our clients coordinated campaigns.
5. We offer our clients a full suite of communications solutions including brand strategy, market strategy, marketing support, public relations, website analysis, web design, web marketing, and advertising services.
6. We offer our clients a comprehensive range of programs and services.
7. We offer our clients an insightful and personal approach, full of creative energy, and dedication to your individual business needs.
8. We offer our clients strategic and creative leadership across a full array of marketing communications.
Do you see what these companies have missed with their copywriting?
They use the phrase ‘our clients’ when they should write ‘you’ in their copywriting.
Why is this important?
Copywriting is selling with words
Copywriting is the art of selling with words. One of the basic rules of any sales interaction is ‘assume the sale’. If you use second person in your copywriting, you are assuming that the reader is already a customer. If you are timid and afraid to assume the sale, your copywriting won’t be as effective.
We can tell from the examples above that many copywriters don’t have sales experience. They might have strong credentials in public relations, marketing or journalism, but they don’t understand sales and the art of persuasion.
Simple copywriting changes can make a big difference
Let’s quickly fix the sample sentences to see how simple changes greatly improve the copywriting.
1. We offer you a full spectrum of advertising related services.
2. We offer you common sense advice that helps you grow your business.
3. Our attention to detail and timelines and our solid production base enables us to offer you the best results.
4. This level of integration allows us to offer you coordinated campaigns.
5. We offer you a full suite of communications solutions including brand strategy, market strategy, marketing support, public relations, website analysis, web design, web marketing, and advertising services.
6. We offer you a comprehensive range of services and programs.
7. We offer you a personal and insightful approach, full of creative energy, and dedication to your individual business needs.
8. We offer you strategic and creative leadership across a full array of marketing communications.
There are other changes that I would make to improve these examples, but I only want to deal with one issue in this copywriting blog post.
How to measure customer focus in your copywriting
At Word Nerds we use a free online tool that measures how well we focus on the customer in our copywriting. It’s called the WeWe Customer Focus Calculator and you can find it at http://www.futurenowinc.com/wewe.htm.
Simply enter a web address, or paste your copywriting in, and it tells you how much you are focusing on your company in your copywriting versus how much you are focusing on your customer.
These are sample results of some copywriting we checked on the site.
For the copy you submitted:
Your Customer Focus Rate: 85.71%
You have 6 instances of customer-focused words.
Your Self Focus Rate: 14.29%
You have 0 instances of self-focused words.
You have 1 instance of the Company Name.
You speak about your customers approximately 6 times as often as you speak about yourself.
Excellent!
If we find our copywriting has a low Customer Focus Rate, we go back and improve it.
You don’t have to look very far to see examples of poor copywriting. Large and respected advertising agencies don’t necessarily know what good copywriting is. They fail to speak to their customers when copywriting.
Remember that copywriting is about customers, so speak to them directly by writing ‘you’.
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One was a presentation I delivered at a breakfast briefing for the American Chamber of Commerce in Melbourne. I covered the basic elements of speech writing including how to structure a speech and how to use rhetorical language.
If you’re interested in speech writing, we have a pdf summary of the presentation that covers how to open and conclude a speech. It also shows how speechwriters use language effectively for business and political speeches. Contact us and we will email you the summary of the speech writing presentation.
Now, getting back to the copywriting blog.
In the last two posts you might remember that I wrote about using simple words and simple phrases in your copywriting while keeping a short average sentence length.
Applying these ideas to your copywriting will result in high readability, which I explain in the post. Since the concept of readability applies to all types of writing (not only copywriting), I decided to post it in my business writing blog.
Read it at http://www.wordnerds.com.au/category/business-writing .
It’s important to measure the readability of your copywriting for reasons that I explain in the post.
Go to the link above to learn about readability. Apply it to your copywriting. Please contact me if you have any questions or comments.
Good luck with your copywriting.
Michael Gladkoff
Word Nerds
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One of the first rules of copywriting is to keep it simple. When copywriting for any format you need to keep in mind that people don’t like reading long or complicated copy.
Have you ever looked at a brochure, website or letter with too much text? Most likely, you put it down without reading it. Poor copywriting is to blame. You’ve probably received eight-page sales letters in the mail. Typically, these have yellow highlighting and several postscripts at the end. I never read these when I receive them. I have never bought anything from one of these sales letters ─ they are too long.
Simple and Effective Copywriting Requires Time and Effort
When copywriting, it takes time and effort to put more effort to produce simple and effective copy. Mark Twain summarised this well when he wrote, “I am sorry this is such a long letter, but I did not have the time to write a short one.” He wasn’t referring to copywriting per se, but his statement can be applied to copywriting.
Unfortunately, some copywriters promote the idea of lengthy sales letters (also called sales sheets) as an effective form of copywriting. A few of these copywriters deliver expensive copywriting seminars on how to write these sales letters.
A basic copywriting tip – use simple words
One of the most basic tips to reduce the length of your copywriting is to use simple words. Copywriting that includes simple words takes up less space and is easier to read.
Here are some ideas of how you can use simple words to improve your copywriting.
Instead of: Use:
accomplish do
ascertain find out
disseminate send out, distribute
endeavour try
expedite hasten, speed up
facilitate make easier, help
locality place
optimum best, greatest, most
utilise use
You can see that simple words convey the same idea with fewer letters. If you apply this idea to your copywriting project, your copy will be much easier to read and take up less space on the page. It’s more inviting to readers, so there’s a better chance your copy will be read.
You can apply this concept to wordy phrases by replacing them with single words when copywriting.
Instead of: Use:
with regard to about
by means of by
in the event that if
until such time until
during such time during
subsequent to after
it would appear that apparently
adequate number of enough
You can improve your copywriting if you follow the suggestions to use simple words and replace phrases with single words.
After you have completed a first draft of your copywriting project, go back and edit what you have written. Replace complicated words with simple ones (a thesaurus is a helpful tool for this) and replace phrases with single words when possible.
This blog post is about copywriting, but the concept of simplicity will improve any type of writing.
In the next copywriting blog post, we’ll look at using simple sentences for more effective copywriting.
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